ARCH1101 - Task 1

• Best Piece of Creative Work - Poem "Matches":

“They’re a perfect match,” my mother says as she shoves me into the dining room.

My eyes rest upon a stranger double my height and double my age.

He comes prepared with a checklist:

Can she cook?

Can she clean?

Is she a baby-making machine?

And I answer each question with the eloquence and tranquillity

that I have rehearsed countless amount of times with the 

pre-written lines of the script my mother has transcribed. 

My parents have their own criteria as they nod in approval 

at the bulky wad of wallets in his pockets.

4 brewed coffees later he picks me to take home, 

like a shelved cereal box amongst many others, 

as he examines my packaging with no concern for the contents, 

and throws me into the shopping cart to then 

walk me down the aisle. 

“They’re a perfect match,” my father says when he hands me my bouquet 

and walks me under the archway to hand me over to my happily ever after.

My parents wave goodbye and a tear escapes my eye when

I am shipped off with a mysterious man, my future sealed with a 

sandpaper kiss. 

From the first day that I moved in, affection was displayed

in the only form that he had ever witnessed.

Pots and pans batter me, 

champagne bottles shatter my soul, 

vein-popping fists knock the life out of me.

My throat shrivels up every night he returns home 

when he towers over me, eyes bubbling with hatred.

Steam huffs from his nostrils onto my face with every roaring breath.

I remain paralysed in a corner when

Strikes rein on me with a hand overflowing with molten lava, him

declaring that “I’m doing this because I love you.”

In a matter of months, this place became a multi-storey mansion of monstrosity, 

a hellhole, a place of lifelong suffering,

littered with lavish lounges, luxurious lipsticks and little liquor bottles, 

the stench of vulnerability never ceasing to suffocate me.

But my lack of condemnation is not an invitation for your violation. 

I yearn for the day when I can shatter a champagne bottle onto the floor,

and with a vein-popping fist write on the wall that 

“I do not need something to match me with in order to be whole.” 

And with a pot in one hand and a pan in the other, I can

smash open a window to my uncertain freedom.

But I am merely the floor, restrained to my place of establishment,  

to be stepped on again and again,

only to cover the surface with a designer rug once finished, 

no sign of the bruises that lay deep between the cracks,

because...

“They’re a perfect match”

This poem titled "Matches" was written for a school-based English assignment I was required to complete back in 2016. I have subsequently had the opportunity to perform dramatic readings of it in front of a number of different high schools for the event of White Ribbon Day, an annual movement that seeks to end domestic violence against women and men. The brief for the task was to compose a poem centred around a topic we were passionate about or what we perceived to be an injustice in the modern world. As a result, my poems' principal concern was the practice of forced marriages, a practice that is not only present in the contemporary world but is often rife in countries beyond our typical bubble that western society provides. As such, I attempted to communicate this by displaying the motivations of those orchestrating the process, and, perhaps more crucial, the emotional turbulence this procedure imposes to those victim to it; varying from pandemonium to eventual capitulation. 

• Great Piece of Architecture - Alhambra Palace:

The Alhambra building is a combination of both a fortress and a palace situated in Granada, Andalusia, Spain. This complex has undergone incremental reformations between its initial construction in AD 889 under the jurisdiction of the Nasrid dynasty up until the Christian reconquest in 1492. The architects, however, remain unknown due to this yet its architectural approach overtime is often consistent with the prevailing authoritative state, evident in the disparity between Nasrid emir Mohammad el-Ahmar's inceptive design and Ferdinand and Isabella's conclusive Renaissance style. What I find to be so captivating and great about this structure are the intricacies that can be observed not only in its grander layout, but also in every element of its design, with every aspect of it appearing to undergo extensive deliberation. This is evident in the elaborate geometric patterns and calligraphy that embellish almost all the walls and ceilings within Alhambra through the implementation of mathematical polygons. Additionally, its multifaceted nature accommodated for both residential use as well as an administrative and ceremonial function which transcended cultural and provincial boundaries, further emphasising its significance as a monumental feat in architectural design.

• A "Beautiful" Photograph

This photograph was taken on January 10, 2019, during the summer holidays where my family decided to vacation at Greenwell Point and its surrounding beaches. It features both my mother and father on a leisurely stroll; a luxury they rarely have the opportunity of indulging in due to their extremely tireless lives. The beauty that I witnessed at that moment directed my decision to capture this photo, which was taken without their knowledge, and even of their knowledge of myself standing behind them. However, I find that to be a fundamental facet of its beauty; the companionship and camaraderie that flourishes between my parents despite the challenges they have been confronted with throughout over 20 years of marriage is what I consider to be beautiful, however conventional it may be...